Snowflakes fascinate me, like so many before me I wonder how something so delicate as lace spun by the breeze, can form and yet fade so quickly. I long to touch a single flake, a tiny piece of heavens lace, perfectly formed and from the skies, like a drop of purity, like a diamond in the light. Nothing is purer than the freshness of snow, like a gift from above, to us down below. If I could hold you I would, and wrap you with care, but if I close my palm around you, when I open it would you still be there?
There is one thing I know as pure as snow, a newly formed baby, which inside me would grow, I longed to hold her, to wrap her with care, to sing to her softly, to stroke her sweet hair. To touch her soft skin, to whisper the words, of how I would love her like heaven loves earth. A gift of purity from the heavens above, oh how I love her, I am consumed with that love. Like you she faded when she touched my palm, I couldn’t hold on, no matter how hard I tried, she was ripped from my body, and with her my soul died.
Made of the breath of heaven, you dance around the trees, a drop of innocence, floating in the breeze. In the light you shine, like a gem or pure gold, you are priceless, perfect and truly divine. You are are hope, faith, you are a promise of new life, you are precious, and perfect, you are all that is right. Like a moment of poetry floating in air, you were all I ever wished for, a snowflake held in my palm, you were my everything I wished for and I was your mum.
So dance my sweet snowflake, and sing in the breeze, you are a divine expression of all that is pure, let heavens light shine on all that you are, and know that I am loving you from afar. Dance and be free, feel no grief where you are, for you are my snowflake, a free falling star.
Mackenzie Glanville
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That is absolutely beautiful and heart wrenching at the same time. Much love to you sweet lady, a wonderful post once again 🙂
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Oh my goodness, this is so beautiful Mackenzie! I love the imagery of snowflakes as Heaven’s lace, that’s so poetic and lovely. Thank you so much for sharing and joining us for Write or Die Weds! 🙂
Happy to be part of ‘Write or Die’, as I am often heard saying “for me writing is like breathing fresh air, I need it to survive”, so the link suits me to a tea. Thank you for your beautiful comment, means a lot!
Mackenzie, I don’t think I’ll ever see a snowflake from now on and not think of your beautiful words. They took me through a roller-coaster of emotions…smiles, tears, and smiles again. I’m assuming this is autobiographical, and if so, many hugs and warm vibes from me to you. How brave of you to be able to articulate and share such a journey with us. Thank you!
Thank you for your beautiful comment and words, I wasn’t expecting to write what I did, I looked at the word ‘snow’ and the words just came from me, it brought out emotions long put away, but never forgotten, thank you for the warm vibes xx
A beautifully written, moving post. I am so sorry for the loss of your little one x
Thank you so much, and thank you for coming by and leaving a comment, much love xx
Oh Mackenzie this is so so poetic, so beautiful, so eloquently written. I had tears reading. You have a talent to move words, my friend. You really do.
Wow Maureen what a compliment I thank you!
Aaah this is so beautiful — and has just made me cry. I can totally relate to these words.
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Thank you for your comment, sorry I made you cry. Big hugs, love Mackenzie xx
Wow, I am sitting at my desk holding back the tears right now. This is so beautiful, heart breaking but utterly beautiful. There really isn’t much else to say other than it’s an absolute stunning piece of writing. Thank you so much for sharing on #twinklytuesday xx
Thank you for allowing me to share it, and thank you for your beautiful comment xx
Absolutely beautiful, but as everyone above has already said, it’s heart breaking. I’m so sorry for your loss. Big hugs. Xx
Thank you xx
Beautifully written, but so very sorry for your loss. I love the imagery. #sundaystars
Thank you for your comment xx
You write so so beautifully, this is such a gorgeous poem that’s clearly come out of a lot of pain and hurt. So sorry for your loss, keep writing xx
Thank you so much! I really appreciate you taking the time to write this comment, it means a lot to me xx
This is so beautiful Mackenzie. So honest and pure. You brought a tear to my eye with your words. I am giving you a big virtual hug right now. xxxxxx
Thank you so much xx
What a beautiful poem. The purity and uniqueness of new life and then how it can melt away through tragic loss. I am sorry that you have had to endure this. My heart goes out to you.
Thank you so much xx
Oh Mac, this is so beautiful and completely devastating all at once. Your words have truly touched me as I am able to fully relate to this kind of sorrow. How wonderful though that you found the strength to write this so perfectly so that it may bring comfort to those that read it. Thank you from my heart to yours xx
I am so sorry that you can relate Amy, it is such a awful thing to go through. I do hope others can find comfort in this writing. Thank you so much for your love xx
Thank you for this beautiful and heartbreaking piece of writing. And that second paragraph… so painful to read. Been there.
sorry for what you have been through xx
What a strong powerful peace; just so beautifully written. I am so sorry for your loss and so glad you have been able to share this. Thanks for linking up to #bestandworst hun and see you soon xx
Thank you xx
Oh Mackenzie I’m so glad I clicked on the link back to this piece. It’s just wonderful. What a beautiful tribute to your snowflakes. xx
Thank you that means a lot beautiful xx
Oh that is such a moving and emotional piece of writing. Really brave to put it out there too. Much love to you.
Mainy x
Beautiful and heart breaking – sending youlove #eatsleepblogrt
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